http://footballblog.co.uk/should-the-dundee-clubs-share-grounds.html View From The Stands Sat, 13 Mar 2010 23:40:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://footballblog.co.uk/should-the-dundee-clubs-share-grounds.html/comment-page-1#comment-216 Lewis Fri, 12 Feb 2010 19:23:35 +0000 http://footballblog.co.uk/?p=1390#comment-216 i think united and dundee shold both join clubs as 1 and be called dundee united city and build a completely different stadium somwhere else in dundee. i think united and dundee shold both join clubs as 1 and be called dundee united city and build a completely different stadium somwhere else in dundee.

]]> http://footballblog.co.uk/should-the-dundee-clubs-share-grounds.html/comment-page-1#comment-127 Challenge Feedback Wed, 02 Dec 2009 07:06:31 +0000 http://footballblog.co.uk/?p=1390#comment-127 A more imaginative title would have earned you more points Article length was bang on when you exclude the quotes. oppertunities > opportunities Was a very interesting read and you showed it was a topic you were interested in, it was a shame you slipped out of journalist mode and in to fan mode at points, if you read it through again hopefully you will see where I mean. Good use of the quote, the images were also excellent, could have just done with a caption. Think it just missed an analysis of whether the fans could eventually be persuaded that it was a good idea, or a quote from the fans. A more imaginative title would have earned you more points
Article length was bang on when you exclude the quotes.
oppertunities > opportunities
Was a very interesting read and you showed it was a topic you were interested in, it was a shame you slipped out of journalist mode and in to fan mode at points, if you read it through again hopefully you will see where I mean.
Good use of the quote, the images were also excellent, could have just done with a caption.
Think it just missed an analysis of whether the fans could eventually be persuaded that it was a good idea, or a quote from the fans.

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