Comments on: Who Is The Best Midfielder In The Premiership http://footballblog.co.uk/who-is-the-best-midfielder-in-the-premiership.html View From The Stands Sat, 13 Mar 2010 23:40:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Challenge Feedback http://footballblog.co.uk/who-is-the-best-midfielder-in-the-premiership.html/comment-page-1#comment-97 Challenge Feedback Mon, 09 Nov 2009 20:41:25 +0000 http://footballblog.co.uk/?p=1164#comment-97 A good thorough article Oliver. Positives: * The number of players you managed to cover within the word limit is impressive. * The videos for every player are a good touch. Thins to work on: * The layout changes half way through, which looks a bit unprofessional. * I felt the article got a bit too predictable towards the end, with the same statistics for every player, a bit of variety would have improved it. * You might want to bear in mind the journalistic convention that numbers one to twenty should be written in letters, but for 21 upwards, just writing the numbers is acceptable. A good thorough article Oliver.

Positives:
* The number of players you managed to cover within the word limit is impressive.
* The videos for every player are a good touch.

Thins to work on:
* The layout changes half way through, which looks a bit unprofessional.
* I felt the article got a bit too predictable towards the end, with the same statistics for every player, a bit of variety would have improved it.
* You might want to bear in mind the journalistic convention that numbers one to twenty should be written in letters, but for 21 upwards, just writing the numbers is acceptable.

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